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Positive Response
6009 Tuswell Dr.
Dublin, OH 43016

enicastro@positiveresponse.com 

614.747.2256

 

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Copywriting Samples
Email & Direct Mail Copywriting

Copywriting for Corporate Capabilities Brochures

Copywriting for White Papers & Case Studies

Content Marketing/Newsletters/Press Releases/Editorial

Web Sites/Online Sales Letters/Landing Pages

 

 

 

EMail and Direct Mail 

That's Great News!
That's Great News! outsources a lot of its back office and marketing work to the Philippines and teamed with
another business to offer outsourcing to its customers. I wrote the email they used for their initial marketing effort.
EMail, short version

EMail, long version

 

EC Outlook

Email to drive attendance for customer conference.

 

Welcome/Stick Letter, Before & After

That's Great News! sells plaques. They sell them on a "we'll send it to you and you have 30 days to pay
us or ship it back at our expense." The company was getting too many returns. I strategized with them
and created a new "stick" package that included a new letter and two additional enclosures.
The new package cut the product return rate.

"Stick" Package (Before)

"Stick" Package (After)

 

What's Working NOW!

I write all the copy and promotions for the What's Working NOW online training and education webinar events.
 

EMail: Social Media Webinar

This was a paid webinar at $119.00 per seat and we had over 140 attendees.

EMail: Marketing On A Shoestring Webinar

Email: Search Engine Marketing Webinar

Email: Cold-Calling Webinar

Email: David Meerman Scott New Rules Webinar

 

IAC
EMail

Salespeople use this email as a follow-up to their voicemail.

 

What's Working NOW!

Series of three postcards to drive attendance at a one-day conference on B-to-B marketing.

Postcard Campaign

Attention-Grabbing Coat Hanger Postcard (JPEG)
(Yes, we actually mailed it as shown.)


Offshore Alert

Direct Response Letter

This letter and its hard hitting facts helped drive registrations for the company's annual conference.
 

Filtration Solutions
Self-Mailer Letter

The response rate was 5%. The self-mailer format I recommended was very economical.
 

CSi Complete
Dimensional Mail Campaign

In addition to writing, I came up with idea for the campaign and sourced the mailers. With telephone follow-up,
CSi Complete pulled a 14% response rate and closed business with more than 5% of the businesses targeted.

 

Northside Building Contractors
(Commercial roofing company)

Postcard Campaign (Cards 1 - 3)

Postcard Campaign (Cards 4 - 5)

 

Performance Tools

High Impact Post-Tradeshow Mailer
 

Magic Plumbing

Postcard Campaign (Cards 1 - 3)

Postcard Campaign (Cards 4 - 6)

The company had been in business for more than 25 years under a couple of different owners. No
one had ever thought of the "oh so obvious" benefit-laden tagline. I did.


Paule Attar Salon & Spa (Writing as a woman FOR women.)

Direct Response Letter
This letter targeting women business owners and executives generated a nearly 4% response. It's a prime example of how a good writer,
like a good actor, can convincingly play many different roles. (Personal note: While writing is my vocation, acting is an avocation.)

 

Lincoln Financial Group

Direct Mail Package

Financial services writing can be challenging with all the compliance issues. Fortunately,
in another life I worked as a stockbroker so I'm very familiar with what you can and cannot say.

 

U.S. Bank of Washington

Letter and Brochure
U.S. Bank launched an internal marketing program aimed at motivating employees to refer
friends and family. This letter (from the bank president) and brochure introduced the program.
 

Southerland Communities
(Land Developer)

Direct Mail Package
"If anyone deserves special treatment it's you." That's the lead for the letter in this DM package mailed to veterans.

 

Action International

"Ouch" Letter

This letter, with a one-word headline of "Ouch," was part of a successful multi-step lead-gen program.

 

Business Properties Commercial Real Estate Brokers

(one complete letter and five excerpts)
Letter Series
I wrote a series of six sales letters for this startup one-man commercial real estate brokerage. Eric
Postle, the "one man," credited this series with helping his new firm get off to a roaring start.

 

Audit My Bills

Letter Series

Audit My Bills helps companies lower their bills and get refunds from basic service providers.

 

 

 

Corporate Capabilities & Marketing Brochures

Capital Resin Corporation

Corporate Capabilities Brochure

Founded in 1976, Capital Resin Corporation is a contract manufacturer of specialty chemicals
with an outstanding track record of service to their customers. A great bunch of people to work with. 


Inter-Action Consultants

Corporate Capabilities Brochure

A Paris-based consulting company that's been very successful in Europe is working hard
to break into the U.S. market. This detailed brochure is part of that effort.

 

Long Circle, Inc.
Corporate Capabilities Brochure
A Chinese-American entrepreneur, who set up a company to provide China-based high-tech engineering
and R&D services contacted me (from Shanghai, China no less) to help them tell their story.

Timberland Custom Homes
Corporate Capabilities Brochure
 

Exhibitors Carpet Service
Corporate Capabilities Brochure

 

Systems Technical Sales
Barcode equipment and consulting
Marketing Brochure

 

 

White Papers & Case Studies

 

White Paper

Key Website Security Facts To Know

 

White Paper

Reusable Packaging: Good For The Environment. Good For Business.

 

White Paper

Selecting and Working With an Application Service Provider (ASP)

 

Case Study

ECOutlook.com Helps Bristol-Myers Squibb Lower Transaction Costs

 

 

Content Marketing/Newsletters/Press Releases/Editorial

Content Marketing
Article-length blog posts for Stevens Worldwide Van Lines

Opening an International Office: 3 Key Considerations When Relocating Employees Overseas

How To Execute A Successful Corporate Relocation: Follow These Six Steps to Ensure a Smooth Move

Tips for Moving in the Winter -- and One Reason Why It's a Good Time to Move

Questions To Ask Your Mover – Or, Yourself

 Managing Your Move: 3 Tips For Holding Down Costs and Minimizing Stress

7 Common Sense Tips for Preventing Identity Theft When You Move

 

Article-length blog posts for Heilind Electronics

I had never written a single word for the connectors industry before doing so for this client, the largest
interconnect specialty distributor in North America. Heilind's blog is currently scheduled to launch in the
second half of June, 2012.

 

Article-length blog posts for Earnest Words
Posts also ran as featured articles in MarketingProfs.com and RainToday.com

Get It Right When You Write (Or Speak): 3 Commonly Misused Words

Why Do People Write This Way? (And How You Can Avoid Doing The Same)

Seven Score And Seven Years Ago: Writing Lessons We Can Learn From Lincoln’s Masterpiece

 

Albert Mensah (Inspirational Speaker)
Newsletter for Clients & Prospects

 

Auto Hound

Customer Newsletter

 

Press Releases

Announcing New Business Win

Announcing New Executives

Announcing A Paid Webinar With Spyro Kourtis
Announcing A Business Conference on B-to-B Marketing
Announcing A Paid Webinar With David Meerman Scott

Central Ohio Theater-Goers Summoned To Court

I wrote the above press release for a local theater group and also acted in the production.

 

 

Article

"How Elvis Helped Seal The Deal: Capturing Attention & Profits With Dimensional Mail"

Published in Deliver Magazine, a publication of the USPS

 

Article

"Vendor-Managed Inventory Systems Utilize Emerging Software Technologies"

Published in The Houston Business Journal

 

Article

"Promise vs. Reality: EDI, XML and E-Business"

Published in Electronic Commerce World

 

Article

"E-Business Is Not A Reality Without Firm Connectivity"

Published in The Houston Business Journal

 

 

 

Web Sites/Online Sales Letters/Landing Pages

 

Online Sales Letter

"Or Will You Too Break Down Sobbing, Head In Hands, Crying Uncontrollable Tears of Relief..."

Jason Evans, CPA Tax Debt Relief Kit

 

Web Content For A Strategic Planning Consultant

Strategy Execution: How to differentiate your business from 95% of the competition

Bottom Line Coach Strategic Plan Development & Execution Process

Executive Coaching

Online sales letter for the consultant's book: Bottom Line Focus

 

Landing page to drive webinar registrations

"Cold-Calling: The Cold Hard Facts About How To Succeed"
What You Need To Do...To Make Cold-Calling Work For You

 

Landing page to drive webinar registrations

"What's Working NOW In Search Engine Marketing: How To Get More Hits, Clicks, Leads & Sales"

 

Web site home page copy

"7 Differentiators That Can Make a Difference In Your Business"

 

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